考官雅思寫作小作文滿分范文 柱狀圖:年齡分布

2017年06月12日14:48 來源：小站教育作者：小站雅思編輯

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摘要：為大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官親筆，用最正統的4段式寫作，本文主題-柱狀圖:年齡分布，共199詞。苦于小作文的烤鴨們，可以好好研讀模仿。

相比較雅思大作文，網絡上與市面上的小作文資料相對較少，質量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鴨，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要圖表類范文的指導，所以，請看本文前考官同學的精彩演繹。柱狀圖：年齡分布，共199詞，band9.

Task1:The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

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The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.

It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.

In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population. France’s population, by contrast, was more evenly distributed across the age ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all people) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French people were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for India was only 2%.

Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from age 50 upwards. For example, almost 3% of French 70- to 75-year-olds were women, while just under 2% were men. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.