英語

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2013年考研英語（一）真題小作文

Directions:
Write an email of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write nearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

題目分析

這是一封邀請信。寫信人李明需要邀請學院的一位外教擔任即將舉辦的英語演講比賽的評委。信中要包含必要的細節信息，如比賽的時間、地點等。

寫作思路

第一段：

本文是一封寫給外教的信，需要自我介紹，因此采用公務信函（問候致意+自我介紹+表明目的）的框架。

第二段：

需要基于題目，靈活修改以下錦囊妙句，選擇其中三至四句，通過合理的串聯，快速構建一篇內容翔實、理由充分的文章。以下是備選錦囊妙句：

錦囊妙句1：

1. 趣味運動會計劃于2025年12月26日下午2:00在我們大學的學生活動中心/騰訊會議軟件/江蘇省江陰市華西村舉行，將持續3小時/天。（此外，本次活動將通過抖音進行直播。）

The fun sports day is scheduled to be held on December 26, 2025, at 2 PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university / via the Tencent Meeting app / in Huaxi Village, Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province, and it will last for 3 hours/days.(In addition, the event will be live-streamed on TikTok.)

這個英語演講比賽計劃于2013年12月26日下午2:00在我們大學的學生活動中心舉行，將持續3小時。

The English speech contest is scheduled to be held on December 26,2013,at 2PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university,and it will last for 3 hours.

錦囊妙句2：

2. 活動旨在激發年輕一代做某事的熱情/給某人提供機會做某事/幫助某人適應大學生活/幫助某人加深對某物的認識。

This activity is designed to inspire the younger generation to do sth./provide sb. with an opportunity to do sth./help sb. adapt to college life./help sb. foster a deeper understanding of sth.

活動旨在激發年輕一代學習英語，豐富課余文化生活以及交朋友的熱情。

This activity is designed to inspire the younger generation to learn English, enrich their extracurricular and cultural life, and make friends.

錦囊妙句3：

3. 活動將由一系列環節組成，比如才藝展示和與專家互動交流。我們學校的校長將為所有參與者致歡迎辭/為優勝者頒獎。

This event will consist of a series of activities, such as talent shows and interactive exchanges with experts. Our university president will deliver a welcome address to all participants/will present awards to the winners.

活動將由一系列環節組成，比如定題演講和問答環節。我們學校的校長將為優勝者頒獎。

The event will consist of a series of activities, such as prepared speeches and Q&A sessions. Our university president will present awards to the winners.

錦囊妙句5：

5. 如果你有時間來參加，這次活動對你來說將會是一次有意義且難忘的經歷。

If you have the time to participate, this event will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.

如果你有時間來參加，這次活動對你來說將會是一次有意義且難忘的經歷。

If you have the time to participate, this event will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.

錦囊妙句6：

6. 以您非凡的專業知識，我們希望您能發表演講，給學生提出有啟發性的建議。

With your exceptional expertise, we hope you can deliver a speech offering inspirational advice to the students.

以您非凡的專業知識，我們希望您能擔任評委，并且給學生提出有啟發性的建議。

With your exceptional expertise, we hope you can serve as a judge and offer inspirational advice to the students.

錦囊妙句9：

9. 故宮在中國人民中很受歡迎/評價很高，它一定能給你帶來全新的體驗。

The Palace Museum enjoys widespread popularity/a high reputation among Chinese people. It will definitely bring you a brand-new experience.

這個比賽在大學生中很受歡迎，它一定能給你帶來全新的體驗。

The contest enjoys widespread popularity among university students. It will definitely bring you a brand-new experience.

錦囊妙句14：

14. 隨信附上議程/細節，供您參考。

The schedule/details is/are attached for reference.

隨信附上議程，供您參考。

The schedule is attached for your reference.

第三段

期待對方答復

妙句成文

Dear Prof. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I, on behalf of the Student Union, am writing this email to invite you to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.

First and foremost, The English speech contest is scheduled to be held on December 26,2013,at 2PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university,and it will last for 3 hours.【妙句1】 What is more, The contest enjoys widespread popularity among university students. It will definitely bring you a brand-new experience.【妙句9】Last but not least, with your exceptional expertise, we hope you can serve as a judge and offer inspirational advice to the students.【妙句6】 The schedule is attached for your reference. 【妙句14】

Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

每日一句

Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign, which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.(2011, Reading Comprehension, Part A Text 3)

詞匯

alleviate: v. 減輕，緩和
recall crisis: 召回危機
relatively: adv. 相對地；相關地
well-orchestrated: 精心策劃的
social-media: 社交媒體
engage with sb.: 與某人互動或接洽

第一步：找謂語

Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign, which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.

第二步：斷句

原句中有2處謂語，包含兩件事，其謂語動詞位于以下分句中：

• 動詞：alleviated 位于主句中
• 動詞：included 位于which引導的定語從句中

按照標點、引導詞以及謂語，可以將原句分為以下分句：

• Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign, —— 主句
• which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg. —— 非限定性定語從句

第三步：簡化

主句

Toyota Motor, for example, alleviated some of the damage from its recall crisis earlier this year with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign,

• 主語部分：Toyota Motor
• 插入語部分：for example
• 謂語部分：alleviated
• 賓語部分：some of the damage
  • 介詞短語：of the damage 做some的后置定語，補充說明some的范圍
  • 定冠詞：the 修飾名詞 damage
  • 名詞：damage 為介詞 of 的賓語
• 后置定語：from its recall crisis 修飾名詞 damage ，解釋說明 damage的來源
• 時間狀語：earlier this year 修飾主句，說明主句發生的時間
• 方式狀語：with a relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response campaign,
  • with 引導的介詞短語做方式狀語，修飾動詞：alleviated，說明動作發生的方式
  • 不定冠詞 a 修飾名詞 campaign
  • 并列結構：relatively quick and well-orchestrated social-media response 做前置定語修飾名詞：campaign
    • 副詞：relatively 修飾形容詞 quick
    • 復合形容詞：well-orchestrated 修飾名詞詞組：social-media response campaign
    • 復合名詞：social-media 做前置定語修飾名詞：response campaign

去掉主句擴展部分，就得到了句子的核心：

• Toyota Motor …… alleviated some …… —— 豐田汽車公司 …… 減少了一些……

非限定性定語從句

which included efforts to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.

• 主語部分：which
• 謂語部分：included
• 賓語部分：efforts
• 后置定語：to engage with consumers directly on sites such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg.修飾賓語：efforts
  • 介詞短語：with consumers 為動詞engage的賓語
    • 名詞：consumers為介詞：with的賓語
  • 副詞：directly 修飾動詞：engage
  • 介詞短語：on sites 做地點狀語，修飾動詞：engage
  • 介詞短語：such as Twitter and the social-news site Digg 做后置定語，舉例說明sites
    • 并列結構：Twitter and the social-news site Digg 為介詞 as的賓語
      • 定冠詞：the 修飾名詞：Digg
      • 復合名詞詞組：social-news site 作為同位語，修飾名詞：Digg

去掉主句擴展部分，就得到了句子的核心：

• which included efforts …… —— 運動包括努力……