題目
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay you should
- describe the drawing briefly
- explain its intended meaning,
- give your comments
做題點
1.使用三段式,第一段:圖片內容;第二段:圖片暗示;第三段:寫自己的評論
2.描述圖片上的信息時,只描述其中的人物動作和人物,不要多寫他們是在干什么(用一兩句話描寫完)
3.寫圖片暗示時,發散思維,往大的主題上靠(孝順等),然后再寫現在年輕人沒有做到圖片上的行為的一些原因
4.寫自己的評論時,寫我們應該做到圖片上的行為,比如平時怎么做之類的.
答案
As we can see,filial piety is prevailing all through the two pictures:in the first frame, an amiable mother is supporting her little daughter while in the second frame, her daughter, who has grown up, is supporting her aged mother instead。
What a happy family full of precious love! The implication conveyed in these two pictures is self-evident: we need to show our concern and respect to our parents. However, most of us fail to do this job. First of all, as our lifestyle gallops along, we are less likely to hold enough awareness on our filial piety. As young men who deem the career as the priority, they often choose to migrate with their jobs, work around the clock and rest with the work files, leaving parents in empty nests.Besides,many people are used to substituting their care for parents with money or gifts. While it is beyond dispute that material support can improve ones’living standards, what those aged people need most is the mental satisfaction and love from their children such as a simple call,a short being back home.
It is easy to draw this conclusion that,to our parents, nothing can be better than the filial piety from children.Whenever possible,we should gather around the table for a “reunion dinner” with our parents; whether busy or not,we need to give our parents a call and tell them we are fine.
答案知識點
----單詞
filial piety 孝道,孝順
prevailing 流行的;普遍的adj
amiable 和藹可親的adj
aged年邁的adj
implication暗示,含意n
self-evident自信的adj
concern 關心n
gallop飛馳v
awareness 意識n
deem認為v
priority優先考慮的事n
migrate 轉移v
substitute代替v
dispute 意見不同n
material材料n
mental 精神的adj
satisfaction滿意n
----短語
grow up長大成人
fail to do 失敗去做…
in empty nests在空巢
reunion dinner團圓飯,年夜飯
give sb a call給…打個電話
most of us我們大部分人
be used to doing習慣于做…
living standards生活水平
-----句型
1.很容易得出這樣的結論
It is easy to draw this conclusion that…
2.只要有可能
Whenever possible,…
3.無論是否忙碌…
whether busy or not,…
4.隨著我們生活方式的飛速發展
as our lifestyle gallops along,…
----通用
1.順序詞
First of all首先
Besides此外
自己的作文知識點
----單詞
imply暗示v
----短語
Send children to school送孩子去上學
Thirty years ago在三十年前
look after照顧
In return for raising us作為她養育我們的回報
